Tuesday, June 5, 2007

Bewitched


you love her
don't you
then why
doesn't she
believe you?

take a step back
this is what
you want?
you're too good
to her

i love
your heart
i can't watch
let you watch
her
break it.

3 comments:

Stacey said...

Is this written from a personal experience ? - I'm always curious to know the origin of particular poems and/or what experience prompted the words.

I'm nosy like that... Well nosy or just jealous that I lack that talent.

Thx for stopping by my blog the other day.

Point Dexter said...

Sometimes we can't all see what others see.

Whiskeymarie said...

I remember wanting to protect my friends from bad romantic situations (come to think of it, I guess I still do) and them never listening to the advice.
People always seem most eager to get into the relationships that they know aren't going to be any good for them.

I learned to be a good shoulder to cry on and not judge.
Why? Because I did the same stupid thing myself. Often.