Monday, June 1, 2009

Gretel

slippery
slinkily
slumbers

warmly
willowing
wonders

flowery
finnicky
fumbles

punctually
peppery
pummels

looks back only once
to determine
not his gait, but her whereabouts.

1 comment:

Verbosity to Me said...

Haha thanks luce! I'm dying to know what you think since you are my expert opinion : )
As for this, I love the concept. I just thought maybe for slippery and slinkily you could make them both either an adjective or adverb. There's another one that is mixed, too. Maybe you wanted it like that--I just got a little thrown off balance. But it's v. original!